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Kicking
Rear End With Your Conclusion - Turning Bland Conclusions into Bold
Conclusions
- "In conclusion,
I urge you to support American independence."
- "I challenge
you to agree with me and fight the Nazis."
- "In summary,
it is important for you to fight well because this is a major
war, your race is depending on you and I am too."
- "I hope
you will join me in thinking back to the old days as I say 'good-bye.'"
- "So, write
your Congressman and tell him/her to make Americans more free."
That's how
five speakers might have ended their speeches if they had not known
the value of strong conclusions. Inexperienced public speakers often
write conclusions as after-thoughts. Veteran public speakers plan
forceful, emotional conclusions leaving their audience with a vivid
final impression. The five speakers were Patrick Henry, Winston
Churchill, General George S. Patton, General Douglas MacArthur and
Reverend Martin Luther King, Jr. Here is how they concluded their
speeches.
- PATRICK
HENRY GIVE ME LIBERTY OR GIVE ME DEATH (March 23, 1775, speaking
to the Continental Congress) Henry concluded his speech by emphasizing
the depth of his own convictions. The speech's dramatic concluding
line has become its title. "Gentleman cry, Peace, Peace-but there
is no peace. The war is actually begun! The next gale that sweeps
from the north will bring to our ears the clash of resounding
arms! Our brethren are already in the field! Why stand we here
idle? What is it that gentlemen wish? What would they have? Is
life do dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price
of chains and slavery? Forbid it, Almighty God! I know not what
course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty or give
me death!"
- WINSTON
CHURCHILL THIS WAS THEIR FINEST HOUR (JUNE 18, 1940, In the House
of Commons following the surrender of France when Britain stood
alone against Nazi Germany in World War II.) The title of the
speech is derived from its conclusion. Churchill uses words to
paint an emotional picture. "The whole fury and might of the enemy
must very soon be turned upon us. Hitler knows that he will have
to break us in this island or lose the war. If we can stand up
to him, Europe may be free and the life of the world may move
forward into broad, sunlit uplands. But if we fail, then the whole
world, including the United States, including all that we have
known and cared for, will sink into the abyss of a new Dark Age
made more sinister, and perhaps more protracted, by the lights
of perverted science. Let us therefore brace ourselves to our
duties and so bear ourselves that, if the British Empire and its
Commonwealth last for a thousand years, men will still say, 'This
was their finest hour.'"
- GENERAL
GEORGE S. PATTON THAT SON OF A BITCH PATTON AGAIN (1944 welcoming
the 761st 'Black Panther' Tank Battalion to Europe in World
War II.) Patton's speeches to his troops were interlaced with
profanity. "Men, you are the first Negro tankers ever to fight
in the American army. I would never have asked for you if
you were not good. I have nothing but the best in my army.
I don't care what color you are as long as you go up there
and kill those Kraut sons-of-bitches. Everyone has their eyes
on you are expecting great things from you. Most of all, your
race is looking forward to your success. Don't let them down,
and, damn you, don't let me down! If you want me you can always
find me in the lead tank."
- DOUGLAS
MACARTHUR DUTY-HONOR-COUNTRY (SPEAKING AT WEST POINT ON MAY 12,
1962.) The 82-year-old MacArthur was bidding the military academy
farewell. MacArthur repeated the phrase 'Duty-Honor-Country' several
times during the speech and concluded with an emotional story.
"The shadows are lengthening for me. The twilight is here. My
days of old have vanished tone and tint; they have gone glimmering
through the dreams of things that were. Their memory is one of
wondrous beauty, watered by tears, and coaxed and caressed by
the smiles of yesterday. I listen vainly, but with thirsty ear,
for the witching melody of faint bugles blowing reveille, of far
drums beating the long roll. In my dreams I hear again the crash
of guns, the rattle of musketry, the strange mournful mutter of
the battlefield. But in the evening of my memory, always I come
back to West Point. Always there echoes and re-echoes in my ears-Duty-Honor-Country.
I bid you farewell."
- MARTIN LUTHER
KING I HAVE A DREAM (AUGUST 28, 1963, AT THE LINCOLN MEMORIAL)
Dr. King quoted two popular songs and skillfully repeated phrases.
"'My country, 'tis of thee, Sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing:
Land where my fathers died, Land of the pilgrims' pride, From
every mountainside Let freedom ring.' And if America is to be
a great nation this must become true. So let freedom ring from
the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire. Let freedom ring from
the mighty mountains of New York. Let freedom ring from the heightening
Alleghenies of Pennsylvania. Let freedom ring from the snowcapped
Rockies of Colorado! Let freedom ring from the curvaceous peaks
of California! But not only that; let freedom ring from Stone
Mountain of Georgia! Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of
Tennessee! Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.
From every mountainside, let freedom ring. When we let freedom
ring, when we let it ring from every village and every hamlet,
from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that
day when all of God's children, black men and white men, Jews
and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join
hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual, 'Free
at last! Free at last! Thank God almighty we are free at last!'"
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